yes! much better! nice job!!

lol, i bet you're wondering who i am, my other account is

thats awesome! more shiney on her blades. really cool altogether though!

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Great texture on the lips and eyelashes, and the little clasps on her costume are well done. Yes, the blades look very dull and matte (although I would almost expect them to be made of some black metal everywhere but the edges so they don't glint too much in the dark). Aesthetically, though, we're all expecting a lot of shine and reflection (If you were trying to be practical or realistic there wouldn't be any flesh showing under a thick solid black body armor, but how fun would that be?).

Also, the red highlights on her arms and legs look spectacular - however, it seems to me she needs some on her torso as well - as it is it just dissappears into a black, irregular mass and makes it hard to see those lush feminine curves of hers! Some red leather lines cupping her breasts and hugging that sleek ribcage would work without loosing the old fashioned military feel to the longer top and thick cuffs. Man those lips look kissable, hope she doesn't bite though . . . .

Great hair - had a girlfriend with that kind of black and red striped hair coloring once. Funny, it looked gaudy at first, but now I really like that look - very fiesty!

Hehe - well she does looks better now - but her (vamp) teeth should be more subtle (smaller) I think - You almost gave her the teeth of a werewolf!

Thanks glad you like this version, I might do some more BloodRayne.

YAY!

Raynie. That's Mrs. Dr. P all the way.

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